by Passionate
Hey pretty good, i lik the words you used, i relate to it alot. |
by Ben
I love your writings. |
by Z
A truly heartfelt poem, great job! |
by dora
G0od j0b 0n this very well written. great use 0f w0rds. t0uching piece. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk it meant s0 much t0 me! =) |
Hey babe! thanx for the comment! i didnt think that it was that good! but hey! i cant exactly comment on my own work and make it count can i! |
Woo Go Shyan! :D Great Poem |
by cLumsy
Yet again... i'm returning the favor... ;D this is a beautiful piece of poetry. i can relate to it a lot... i especiallyl like how you phrased the poem! keep up that great work! 5/5 |
by TinyDancer46
I really liked this poem, so keep up the good work! |
by Chit Cyn
Very warm and touching. We, women are so emotional than men and at times they dont see it. The message in this poem was related to the readers so concretely that it took just one reading to understand the thoughts invoked. It doesnt need hardcore, dense literature to make the poem shine, as long as the feelings are drawn and the message flows smoothly for readers of all ages to comprehend, a piece of write is at its finest, a work of progress. I love your style, free-verse but proportionate in all accounts. U go poetess, ur pen can move mountains. |
by Rich
Hey - what a terrific poem! I'm always looking to see what you'll write next. You're on my favorites! |