Comments : Lost path!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    Hey pretty good, i lik the words you used, i relate to it alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ben

    I love your writings.

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    A truly heartfelt poem, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    G0od j0b 0n this very well written. great use 0f w0rds. t0uching piece. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk it meant s0 much t0 me! =)
    l0t 0f l0ve/d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Hey babe! thanx for the comment! i didnt think that it was that good! but hey! i cant exactly comment on my own work and make it count can i!
    Great work!! i think that your an exceptional writter!
    Keep it up! and please look and comment on my other poems if you get the chance!
    thanx babe!
    Love Paige!
    XoXoXoXoXoXo

  • 18 years ago

    by UnspokenDream

    Woo Go Shyan! :D Great Poem
    C ya L8r Hun
    Jay

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Yet again... i'm returning the favor... ;D this is a beautiful piece of poetry. i can relate to it a lot... i especiallyl like how you phrased the poem! keep up that great work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I really liked this poem, so keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chit Cyn

    Very warm and touching. We, women are so emotional than men and at times they dont see it. The message in this poem was related to the readers so concretely that it took just one reading to understand the thoughts invoked. It doesnt need hardcore, dense literature to make the poem shine, as long as the feelings are drawn and the message flows smoothly for readers of all ages to comprehend, a piece of write is at its finest, a work of progress. I love your style, free-verse but proportionate in all accounts. U go poetess, ur pen can move mountains.
    Thanks for rating/reading my poems. I am a new member here barely a week...

    urs, in rhythm&rhymes -cynthia

    PS
    I can also be reached on the following sites:
    http://poetrypoem.com/chitcyn (the lighter, sensual side)
    http://poetrypoem.com/moongoddess1 (a tribute to me by some writers)
    http://poetrypoem.com/cynal ( the bolder/darker side)
    www.poetrycoffeeshop.com (poetry critiques/forum)
    www.poetry.com ( poem contest and exhibition)
    www.poets.com (poet's workshop)
    www.allpoetry.com (username Cia Ang)
    www.poemshunter.com (username Cia Ang)

  • 18 years ago

    by Rich

    Hey - what a terrific poem! I'm always looking to see what you'll write next. You're on my favorites!