I Would

by myshiningstar14   Nov 29, 2005


Our love form above, like a dove. I would climb the highest mountain and swim in a sea full of thumbtacks just to be eclipsed by you.

Our love so true, my heart stops at the thought of you. I would eat a whole bucket of worms. and tie myself to train tracks and die for you.

***please comment** xxLISSA

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  • 18 years ago

    by angie A

    Brilliant poem once again!! this poem was soo romantic i loved the rhymes!!
    5/5 oh and just so you can know your on my favorites list!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    Nice poem,
    keep up the good job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Shawna

    I think it is from your heart, and you stated what you would do for the person you love. very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Unknown

    Umm this is a 4 srry but it was good and keep it up gurl and thanks for the comment
    TheRealMan

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    It seems a little drastic so I hope this love is well worth it, but I like this poem. It sounds like something I would say.

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