Don't

by Marine Wife   Nov 29, 2005


Don't hate me
for my dreams
because i only
dream of you

don't laugh at
any of my wishes
because they're all
to be with you

don't regret
meeting me
because i don't know
where i would be without you

don't wish I
would change my
inspirations, because
I'm inspired by you

don't have doubts
about being with me
because my only doubt
is not having you

don't get mad
at all my emotions
because i just can't help
the way you make me feel

don't tell me
all these lies
because all i want
is the truth

don't abandon me
in this hateful world
because I'm lost
without you in it

don't think of
me as obsessed
because I'm only afraid
of losing you!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    I love this, excellent work. i love the way its written, keep writtin.
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    Unbelieveable!! we have so much in common!! i couldn't have said it better myself! i added u to my favorites list! hey maybe u can check out a few of my poems!! i think u can relate!! keep writing and i'll keep reading!!! thanx and God bless

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I love all the metaphors and paradoxal language that you use in this. Truly inspriring poem. Amazing.. I love your poetry!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cimara

    I really liked this poem, i can completely relate to how you feel. It's frightening actually, didn't think anybody else felt that way. Great work! xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Wow... you're a great poet! i love this poem. keep up that gorgeous talent! 5/5 ;D

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