Outstanding! The entire piece is superb, but I really like this stanza:

"Voice of truth is overthrown
Tears of salt burn crimson cheeks
Reddened eyes of blackened souls
Welcome in December weeks"

Just brilliantly written! Take care~Holly

This poem is wonderful you really are something special! **soleil

Wow this was amazing! and outstanding piece of work indeed. it was beautiful the flow was great and i loved the subject you chose to write about. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Beautiful! love the flow. great job 5/5