The Perfect Ending...(part 1)

by blindedxxbyxxlove   Nov 30, 2005


***Part 1***

A little girl with eyes so blue
Fell in love with a boy she barely knew
She dreamed about him day and night
At once she knew it was love at first sight
With his big brown eyes, his long brown hair
His soft spoken words, his gentle stare
Everything she ever wanted she seen in him
She took her chances and went out on a limb
Finally she won his love and affection
She won his heart, she won his attention
She felt so safe in his warm, loving arms
he held her close and kept her from harm
She loved him with all her heart and soul
He made her smile, he made her whole
Everything was perfect, it was all in place
But they slowly grew apart, their love had been erased
What had she done to deserve this pain?
Her heart poured out through her tears like rain
For weeks she waited for him, with no return
He stole her heart and left her to burn
Drained with no energy, deprived of sleep
She couldn't take the pain
So she started to cut as she started to weep
The more she thought of him the more she bled
The more she thought she was better off dead
All she wanted was the man she adored
But this was only the calm before the storm...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Love this poem.. seems like a story.... 100/100 :P

  • 17 years ago

    by Rhea

    Very very good
    i like it a lot
    luv hurts

  • 18 years ago

    by Hades

    Excellent and heartwrenching, a masterpiece, keep writing, you have a gift

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    I'm sorry...I re-read it. I cry everytime I do! Baby, you write so good! You are one of the only ones that can make me bawl my ****ing eyes out! I LOVE YOU SISSY! (always!)

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Awwww......I am in tears. I don't know who that's about but it reminds me of me and *runaway*. Hurry up and write the next part! I LOVE YOU ALWAYS SISSY!