Wow, this brought a tear to my eye. so emotional and well written, well done 5 *****. love lynne x |
by Miranda
Wow... that was really good. that is how i feel most of the time. 5/5 love miranda |
by Dani
Wow, that was an excellent poem. I loved how you made the point that you really have to think about things before you do them because you will always have the memory that it happened to you. That everything, even though it is done and over with that it will always be with you. If not just for a memorie. I loved the end because the way that i understood it, i took it as the pain was gone but the memory was still there. It really relates to real life. |
by Fadedstar
Aww good poem! |
Nice poem loving it!!! |
Wow. this was really good. |