Awww..tear jerker. I loved it, its super sweet!!! I loved the last stanza!! Great work and keep it up and I will comment on more tonight!
Love ya xoxoJulie

Aww...joe has human feelings..vito hasnt completely taken over his mind..lmfao..i like it it's cool.

CUTE I wish my BF could write like that

Awwe i like it so very much i really like your style of writing it's pretty sweet! all keep reading