Omg that was amazing. bloody amazing. i have never read another poem like this. i luv it!
u really made it feel like you were in there right with them good job. i look foreward to reading part 2!
keep up the great work
luv me

Ur a BEAUTIFUL ritter and ur words are jus so pericing and i luv it!

Wow, brilliant write. such vivid imagery... (and now to read the second half....)

Dude im definitely going to the 2nd half you've got one hell of a vocabulary.