Wow this is brilliant. u hav talent thats 4 sure. iv read many war poems but none like urz. they are awsum
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Wow this is brilliant. u hav talent thats 4 sure. iv read many war poems but none like urz. they are awsum
keep it up
check out sum of my work if u get the chance
luv me

OMFG!!!!!!!!!....... u r so0o0o0o0 talented!!!!!..... DAMN!!!!!! this is the best poem by far that i hav probly read!!... EXCELLENT!!! keep writtin!!!!!

Love it.

Absolutely amazing. brilliant work. flawless. once again vivid imagery. wonderfully crafted. very well done, both pieces are fantastic!

Though i may only in high school sir, i want to genually thank you for serving this country. your story was trully amazing, by the time i had finished reading, i couldnt help but cry. thank you so much sir. i'll never forget you, or any veteran. and may god bless you and your family.

Truely amazing and touching by the time i finished reading i was definetly in tears..god bless you and your family..and god bless for serving our country.

A tale of a thousand emotions: pain, hate, rage, sadness, depression. A beautiful and terrible tale.

This past Rememberence Day I was in a war museum filled with battle memorabelia and veterans. Every single veteran I spoke to, spoke about the horrors of it, and how they were lucky to come home. I remember thanking one, for his service in the Second World War, it brought tears to his eyes...

I truly loved this poem, both parts... It really makes you think about how special life is. 100/100 for sure!