Love till the End

by morgan   Nov 30, 2005


Fingers interlocked
smiles exchanged
together forever
both lives changed

a story cut short
a beautiful beginning
an amazing middle
a tragic ending

they met at a party
both with virgin lips
they danced all night long
his hands on her hips

they left the party
hand in hand
and ended up together
naked on the sand

a wonderful evening
a magical night
a perfect beginning
with no future in sight

a year passed quickly
after they got involved
but then he got a problem that
he didn't think could be solved

she tried to help
but he would just get mad
she thought that it had something
to do with his deadbeat dad

their first fight happened
a year and nine months after they met
it was about his drinking
and a fixed sports bet

he left in a hurry
and went to see a friend
but who knew this
would be her end

she rushed to apologize
and drove down the road in her car
not being 21 she knew
he wouldn't be in the local bar

she knew that he didn't
go to see his friend
she had to make things right
she didn't want things to end

she was too much
in love to let it end
but what she didn't see
was another car around the bend

a black Ford truck
driving too fast
a bottle blocking his sight
he tried to forget his past

blurred vision
a cluttered mind
too many thoughts
to leave it all behind

his car hit hers
a flash of lights
then he realized that there
would be no more fights

he was in a
hospital bed
thinking about what
she had said

she would love
him forever
that she wouldn't
forget him ever

sitting on his bed
he put his bottle aside
picked up his knife
it was his time to decide

a life without her
he could not bear
putting the knife to his shirt
he made a small tear

there was no
point to his life
nothing without her
the only way out was his knife

he had killed
the love of his life
and now he was to end
his with that sharp knife

blackness engulfed
his mind
as he left all
his worries b e h I n d .

yall who just gave me a 3 on this should shove it, i woked on this for like 2 days! my friend read it to like 6 ppl and they all said it was BAMF and for all you who don't know what that meens, well lets just say it means AMAZING.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kelley

    You are amazing and best friend !!

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor

    Me gusta el poema, Morgan. Me gusta. 5/5...even rivising it more woulding hurt...this is really something and a poem is never finished...you can make it perfect...it's amazing I love your trabajadora...keep up the good work amigo....buenos dias...
    taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by ANGELA

    Hey i like it...even thow its abit sad but really good...keep it up... :) !!!!
    and i liked te way u put bamf...lol meaning amazing..thats funny..