I love this poem. It is excellent! I can relate to it a lot. I really like this part:

They've pinned me lifeless,
Breathless on the floor.
His love that once protected me,
Protects me no more.

Fantastic job. Keep it up.

Tiffany.xox.

You've gotten so much better, I can't believe how much you've learned from this site! You know me and chrissers were only here cus we're nosey, we're never gonna be able to write anything so maybe you should write us one so atleast we'd have SOMETHING! lol jk, but keep it up tho.

Yeah, I think it belongs right where you have it. by the way, this poem is awesome. 5/5

I think it's in the perfect category...dark poems. it was excellent and makes you think. i love poems that do that.