by ||The...Nameless|| Nov 30, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
cyber friendship
Take those chances |
by hm
HEY THAT WAS SUCH A COOL POEM I L0OVED IT ALL BUT THIS WAS MY FAVOURITE PART |
by Larry
The words deserved a four or better -- but where are your punctuations? You started out really consistent in your stanzas -- and then changed your pattern -- remained consistent and use punctuations |