The words deserved a four or better -- but where are your punctuations? You started out really consistent in your stanzas -- and then changed your pattern -- remained consistent and use punctuations

HEY THAT WAS SUCH A COOL POEM I L0OVED IT ALL BUT THIS WAS MY FAVOURITE PART

Dont care what people think
They dont live in your skin
Its your choices
That let you get happiness from within

ITS SO TRUE WELL TAKE CARE KEEP SHINING WITH LOVE jOsIe