34.Drip

by Katie   Nov 30, 2005


Can you hear that
drip drip drip
What is it?

Is it the tap
In the kitchen
No

Is it she
Who's dying slowly
Yes

What did she do
Why did she do it
Don't know

Would you tell me
If you knew
Maybe

Are you lying
Or telling the truth
Neither

Then what are you doing
Who are you
She, who is dead

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  • 19 years ago

    by .:.StEpH.:.

    I like the way you didn't answer everything that the reader would have wanted to know and you sort of kept it very to the point i think it has meaning and feeling you just have to look past the words.

  • 19 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Very interesting.... this concept was very unique i can see what the above comment means but i still think it works well, there isn't a lot of detail and description but i think it makes it mysterious.

    xxx cici xxx

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