Dark angel (edited)

by cowgirlstar26   Nov 30, 2005


A black laced dress
pale white skin
descended down from heaven
for so many unforgotten sins

a motionless body
dark Blue crimson eyes
silent screaming ceases
No more tears will be cried

black silky feathers
now stained with blood
all the angel ever wanted
was simply to be loved

step into her gaze
and look upon the marks
don't notice all the pain
and the forever broken heart

it's obvious that she was hurting
with blood still running down her wrist
you could see hundreds of scars,
left from the razors gentle kiss...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very well done.

    I enjoyed this, I'm really looking forward to your next poem. Interesting subject matter compared to some of your other poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    A really good sad poem that just doesn't tell you what it's about til the final line. I loved it! Kept me intrested and a bit jealous about how well written it was.

  • 18 years ago

    by emorco08

    WoW i really like this poem its nice and dark
    ttyl

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    Lol I Tried To Vote Twice For This Poem And They Wouldn't Let Me :( I Loved The Way You've Related And Angel To Agony, Its Like The Best Of Both Worlds In One Poem...Brilliance Mixed With Bliss = 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    I thought i commented this one already lol well anywayz it was sooooooooooooo good i loved it your very talented

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