Hey great poem...good flow and very deep...keep up the good work!!:)

*try and comment/vote mine to..thanx
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Very dark...awesome! I loved it! 5/5

Wow, I loved the vocab you used, 5/5 it really drags the reader into it! thanks for r/c on my poem

~Natalie~

I agree, you have used your choice of words well! i could feel the emotions.
great poem!!! luv em

The words were well but something was lacking. It was good flow off near the middle but still good.
~DFTI

Wow. Very deep poem. Very true message too.

I could feel a heavy mass of despair hanging over me while reading this poem. Your poems are those whereby the readers can relate to, I know I can feel that it's written straight from the heart. It's filled with such horrible emotions none can ever escape. I feel like I've taken a ride through your mind. Very dark indeed..

Well nice poem i liked it but if mist is all thats coming after me ill get my fan and vacum and ill go down fighting anyhow 3/5 from me lookin for to yur next poem

I like the flow but the ending was a little bit cliched, good one though, nice images.
4/5 Luv Helen xxx