Vanish

by Chantelle   Nov 30, 2005


I hear the sound again
The sound of my heart breaking
No one else can hear it but me
I can feel the pain again
The pain of the blade
Digging into my skin
I can see my life story
Flashing in front of me
It makes me want to leave more
So I push the blade deeper
And the story stops

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kitty

    I can see my life story
    Flashing in front of me

    Lol that is exactly what i was thinking while reading your poem, it i sso true, this is a really gr8 poem i loved it. BTW thanx for teh comment, deeply appreciated.
    Katelyn xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Short to the point which was good in its own way. I like the usage of story though.
    ~FotF

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Omg... so sad... hun if you need anything, please let me know. I hope you're okay. Great poem though, you did a great job at expressing the pain

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