Life- A Silky Lace

by Mezmeryz   Nov 30, 2005


I am walking on the face,
Of the earth
Wondering of the silky lace,
Since my birth
Thinking why when having fun,
There is an end
Every story that has begun,
Holds a bend

When happy thoughts of others differ,
Which lies beneath,
No-one sees the pain you suffer,
And all the grief.

Why walking along my silky lace
Upon the earth,
Hold tears of misery on my face,
And not of mirth.
Learning from my mistakes and strife,
Without disgrace
When I slip and fall throughout my life,
A Silky Lace.

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  • 18 years ago

    by jac

    Very unique, original, amazingly written.. I liked it, a lot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    I love the style this was written in, the poem is original and just great. It's so sad, it feels quite bleak and desperate. But I love your work, so that's good :) xx

  • 18 years ago

    by newlun

    Another great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow i really love how you related life to silky lace, i really do i think it added alot to the poem, i really don't know how to imporve it maybe make it longer i dunno , i think its amazing the way it is,

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    Another amazing work of art...this is just breath taking..i wonder where u get all of ur ideas from...but wherever u get them from its just a great place 4 u....keep up the great work and i'll be on the lookout 4 u...5/5 mama

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