Wow, this was an amazing poem, i wonder y anyone didnt commented so far?
well this is a great piece of art, hope u know this too.

great work and keep it up
all the best and take care

Wow..so well written. It flows really well. I don't see anything here that needs to be fixed nor improved. It's wonderful just the way it is. Keep up the good work.

Wow hun amzing poem, you have such and amazing gift keep it up

Interesting poem...hey...ur poems are great...they are all unique in your way...and life...a silky lace...wow...u r good...ur poems are beyond ordinary..they r just awesome...

Another amazing work of art...this is just breath taking..i wonder where u get all of ur ideas from...but wherever u get them from its just a great place 4 u....keep up the great work and i'll be on the lookout 4 u...5/5 mama

Wow i really love how you related life to silky lace, i really do i think it added alot to the poem, i really don't know how to imporve it maybe make it longer i dunno , i think its amazing the way it is,

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Another great poem

I love the style this was written in, the poem is original and just great. It's so sad, it feels quite bleak and desperate. But I love your work, so that's good :) xx

Very unique, original, amazingly written.. I liked it, a lot.