So Kill Me

by Matters   Nov 30, 2005


So kiss me like you did,
My heart stopped beating.

So love me like you did,
The memories are fleeting.

So hold me like you did,
I promise not to go,

So have me like you did,
Digging deep below.

So hide me like you did,
Take away my presence.

So leave me like you did,
Evacuate my essence.

So hate me like you did,
Don't clot my endless bleeding.

So kill me like you did,
My heart stopped beating.

Yeah, the first line was inspired by a line from a song, but it was just inspiration, not plagiarism.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Omar

    Whoa awesome poem. I liked the flow of this poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by aliiiii

    I love all of your poems. They are so, amazingly done. I look forward to reading more. EQUILIBRIUM

  • 19 years ago

    by .tiana ღ laura.

    Holy this is also an amazing poem... i dont know what to say! i liked how you wrote it and kept using the word did.... it made it originallll haha
    xo adge

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I miss your poems...so so very much...so sorry lol...I'm not grounded from the com...just haven't got much time on it...well...this is one great piece...short and simple...yet deep and sweet...

  • 19 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Nice write bud - interesting words and rythem

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