Aw this is amazing, Awww so cute made me smile and cry at the same time hun, absolutely beautiful, well done once again , take care xxoo |
Really loved it, great piece of work. |
by xEmmax
Hey, glad ur back again! loved this poem, the wording and layout were really effective. excellent! 5/5. |
by Torn
Aww matt:'( |
by Bec
This is good. |
Excellent, I loved the way it flowed. Great poem, Look forward to reading more. |
Great Poem. Loved it. |
by UnWaNtEd
You do notice that this is a bit of a song? well...anyway..i love the song ....lol.....keep it up...UnWanted |
by Fadedstar
Aww reallyy good poem! |
by Passionate
Hey i like this poem a lot, its short but says pretty much what i want to say to a couple of people. 5/5 i think! maybe you could read mine and rate/comment on them, i'd appreciate it... thanx keep it up! |
by lilia
Very beautiful...loved it. i can relate. 5/5 |
by hannah
Omg...this is truely one of the best poems ever...i feel like this all the time. |
by just a poet
Wow, great poem and so true, i no how u feel as i feel it too. |
by Tom Swart
Nice write bud - interesting words and rythem |
I miss your poems...so so very much...so sorry lol...I'm not grounded from the com...just haven't got much time on it...well...this is one great piece...short and simple...yet deep and sweet... |
by .tiana ღ laura.
Holy this is also an amazing poem... i dont know what to say! i liked how you wrote it and kept using the word did.... it made it originallll haha |
by aliiiii
I love all of your poems. They are so, amazingly done. I look forward to reading more. EQUILIBRIUM |
by Omar
Whoa awesome poem. I liked the flow of this poem. |