Hey lol ur grandads a smart man, i was trying 2 sum it up xactly, lol glad u understood :) g8 peom by the way, i luv how u left gaps in between the next line, it made me wanna keep reading anyway gud job, keep up the gud work and keep in touch :)
lots of love
eddi
xoxo

Hey love ur poem. Awsome.

WOW that was truley amazing i loved it.Its so touching it just makes you think n i dunno i love it. I like the way you wrote it too with all the spaces and lines inbettwen it gives it a different effect then if you just wrote it write out. your very talented...5/5 for sure keep up the great work