Why do you rate all your poems 5/5?
don't like it.

OO, I liked it. Very unique, the 'flow' of this is quite unusual - but it fits in together really well. Nice job :)

This has a sort of schitzophrenic (mind the spelling) feel to it, the solid rhythmic pulse which is usually used in happier poems gives it a more upbeat feel, but the words nearing the end give a darker, more disturbing fel. rock on dude !

ralb

This has a sort of schitzophrenic (mind the spelling) feel to it, the solid rhythmic pulse which is usually used in happier poems gives it a more upbeat feel, but the words nearing the end give a darker, more disturbing fel. rock on dude !

ralb