And these heavy tears fall from the sleeping ugly's hollow eyes. Take her hand now and we will be our guides to a world where we don't need to feel we have to go. My Violet Raven, dark princess of woe don't let go, please stay one more night with me and then when that day is over I shall ask again. Sleeping Ugly notices your subtle shadow and your silent whispers to the world, if only they would open their eyes to see the beauty they could have lost that night. I'm glad your still here dear friend.

The Sleeping Ugly
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Stick together, because alone we fall.
To my dusty knight, you will find the princess you deserve

I loved those lines! Very origional and creative. I felt your pain and sorrow. I am very sorry for your hurt. But...(and I know this is so cliche...sorry) you never know...tomorrow may be better. The reason I never committed suicide was because I couldn't talk myself into getting over the question "what if?" You just never know!

Hey omg u just mad me cry!i luved it! its just how i feel!well most of it!i hope everything is okay!thanks 4 da comment...luv lots josie

Hey omg u just mad me cry!i luved it! its just how i feel!well most of it!i hope everything is okay!thanks 4 da comment...luv lots josie

Awww thats really good 5/5

Great work. it made me cry

Hey hun... you are an amazing writer. There are very very few poems that have ever touched me the way this poem has. I'm very sorry for all of your pain, but if you need someone to talk to, about anything... I'm here. I'm not just saying that either. Feel free to talk anytime. Keep writing poems, for you're very talented

Wow thats really good

Again, another wonderful poem! loved it