by Nathan Nov 30, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
After most of the day, away in my drudge |
I love the imagery created especially in the begining which was rock solid. |
by Kim
I'm in the process of readin some of your poems now but I throughly enjoy them. Thanks for the comment too, finally someone who can give constructive critism!!! This poem was excellent I muchly loved the rhythm. You're one of the better writers I've found on here so far :) |
by Nathan
Thanks =) |
Wonderful poem, absolutely brilliant imagery!!! i loved the rhyme scheme, and the tempo kept the poem really up beat. i love the stanza: |
by Priscilla
Awsum poem,i luv it..5/5,thnx for ur rate/comment,so i returned the favor |