Friendship should be

by just a poet   Nov 30, 2005


A friendship should be,
filled with love,
filled with care and bubbles,
a friendship should be a haven to all,
a way to say I'm here for you.

a friendship should not stab you hard,
between the shoulder blades,
a friendship doesn't ;et a guy,
tear it and throw it away.

a friendship is true to it sword,
no secrets are kept outside,
all is known to the other,
and all is kept in the heart.

a friendship is not what i had,
its something I'm looking for,
a friendship is what i pine for,
a shoulder to cry on is what i want!!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Well put. I liked the messge you sent, and the poem itself was very clear.
    As always~ Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by me

    Oh yea now u got to comment and vote on my pems if u want to

  • 18 years ago

    by me

    Really good i liked it a lot and yea everyone needs a shoulder to cry on keep it up! :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Gretchen

    Awww I liked this sooo much!!! Having a friend you can go to and cry in their arms is always a good thing and something I too wish I had. Good job on the poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dolores DLF

    Finally I see!! That was so pretty!! I loved this poem. You really have a way with words. I understood it so much that I wanted to be your friend!! Thank you prince elneaz for commenting on my poem. It meant alot to me. I am glad you loved it. Isn't weird how pain can make you write things that still to this day make you cry? But anyway, Thanx again for your comment and I will be reading more of yours as soon as I can!

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