Pain

First off, yeh, good poem. Im not here to diss peeps and their writing, yeh, an i do undastand dat peeps hav probz. I dont object 2 peeps talking abt their probz, ryt, but a lota da tym on here, da poems r all about how theyre pain is so much worse dan otha peeps. And its not. I dont know wat dese peeps hav been thru, but dey dont know what ive bin thru on da same token. If u read a lota dese poems, dey are almost glorifying wat dey do; cutting is an illness, peeps shouldnt go round acting like dey r beta and in more pain dan othas.

It's a good poem, but it's really eerie and sad, well done writing it though, keep it up

-Stabby x

Good poem, but really really sad! i can relate, and im sure many others can too. but please be careful, and im here if u need me,
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