by Fighter (Ariane L.) Nov 30, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Rehearsing her lines once more, she heads for the stage. |
Beautiful, and such a different topic. Amazing, I loved this one because I think everyone feels like an actress ro an actor from time to time in their every day life, spweing words that we know will get a happy reaction and hiding the troubled thoughts etc behind brightly coloured costumes. 5/5 I loved it very unique |
by Ariana
I thought the topic of this was quiet different and I liked how you showed that idea of hiding behind a mask. I was hoping for a happier ending though I see how the ending ties in with the rest of the poem. The whole piece sounds very sad and depressive, you have created the atmosphere really well. well done :) |
We always think we're the only ones hiding, but we're not. Great write. |
We always think we're the only ones hiding, but we're not. Great write. |
Bravo, wonderful just wonderful!!! |