by Pure Silence
OMG! this is my new fav poem of all time fighter, -saldy i still dont know your real name lol-this is just so... real to me cause I feel like that in drama class,... oi its so....OO I LOVE IT lol but i did notice that character is splet wrong or what? lol keep it up 20000000000000000/5 |
by ScarletHaze
Wow hun i jus found one of my nu faves in fact i think it mite just be my fave! this poem is excellent it really goes gr8 with the whole hiding behind a mask but it does it in a slightly different way than every one else does once again brilliant xoxoxoxo |
by Torn
AWESOME poem huni..this holds so much truth..wow! |
by SammiBABY
Aw! it really tells a story like a poem should! a great read :) |
by Scaleeski
Very good!! |
by Mark
All i can say is wow! how write so good i will nva no! |
by Rachel
This is so good and true, i can relate to it. it's very well written. thank you so much for the sweet comment on my poem |
Bravo, wonderful just wonderful!!! |
We always think we're the only ones hiding, but we're not. Great write. |
We always think we're the only ones hiding, but we're not. Great write. |
by Ariana
I thought the topic of this was quiet different and I liked how you showed that idea of hiding behind a mask. I was hoping for a happier ending though I see how the ending ties in with the rest of the poem. The whole piece sounds very sad and depressive, you have created the atmosphere really well. well done :) |
Beautiful, and such a different topic. Amazing, I loved this one because I think everyone feels like an actress ro an actor from time to time in their every day life, spweing words that we know will get a happy reaction and hiding the troubled thoughts etc behind brightly coloured costumes. 5/5 I loved it very unique |