The Nights Are Crumbling

by Poetic Tragedy08   Nov 30, 2005


*Note* It's really not a lost love but one that's starting to fall apart

What happened to the nights
The nights long spent in talk
The nights full of love in dreams
The nights you wanted to be with me...

What happened to the days
The days of holding linked hearts
The days full of us and your smile
The days you let me hold you...

What happened to the thoughts
The thoughts that kept me me loved
The thoughts full of me and you
The thoughts where you actually loved me...

Our nights are slowly crumbling...
Slowly beneath our surface...
I can't let it fall but it's still going
The last resort is pulling through me

I haven't pulled this for a while
But I think tonight is my new night
I will relive with a kill
Just leave me alone and leave me be

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  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Interesting this is ok. the repetition is good and you really portray your feelings.

  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    >.>* anyways... pressed wrong button sorry x.x... but, yea most of my poems i've written so far is about how my relationship is falling apart, and how we used to be, i hope you can talk with your girlfriend about this? hopefully sort things out, my boyfriend and i haven't talked in 6 days and hes considering to breakup since he think its hruting too much, but it wont help anything either if we do... when i saw him on wednesday we didn't even talk, only looked at eachother for a while and walked away, only seeing the pain in eachothers eyes.. >.

  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    :( hey... my relationship is crumbling too >.

  • 18 years ago

    by Josh

    Your writing clearly expresses the feelings that you have and I would like to give you some advice...
    I myself am going through something like a crumbling of a relationship... But heres my advice...
    You gotta find yourself. You gotta know who you are before you can define yourself with another person.
    Email me for more counsel....

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