Please come home dad

by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~   Dec 1, 2005


Everytime i think of you,
another second goes by,
everytime i picture your face,
i ask myself why?
everytime your name is mentioned,
all i can do is cry,
everytime i look back,
i try n forget all the lies,
everytime i hear your voice,
i dont wanna say goodbye,
everytime i see your name,
the love i feel will never die,
everytime i see a bird,
i picture us up high,
everytime i stop and think,
i think of you and sigh,
everytime i am down,
i remember you and try,
everytime that i dream,
i think of us high in the sky,
everytime i read this poem,
i think you\'ve been gone so long,
so daddy can you please com home,
and tell me nothings wrong?

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  • I love this poem as - like so many people - I can relate. Love your work! xx Daniella

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this...I can relate...it almost made me cry.
    I loved the imagery, flow and rhyme scheme.
    The wording touched me deep.
    Excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I love the structure, the rhyming is great, the content is beautiful. it has so much emotion..

    it's a really well written poem.

    well doen :D

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    W0w, This Poem Is So Emotional. Great Work..... 5/5

    x0x LoveLustTragedy x0x

  • 19 years ago

    by christina marie

    Awwwww! i love it! it's sooooo sweet! i hope he comes home soon!

    Xo*Xo
    **Lollipop Sweetie**

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