I couldnt have said it better...and lord, do I wish my dad would come home...7 years since he left...wonderful work, 5/5 keep it up.

hold fast and rest easy,
~Matt~

Oh, this poem's sad! Its good though! Really good! Keep writing! Great job!

Awwwww! i love it! it's sooooo sweet! i hope he comes home soon!

Xo*Xo
**Lollipop Sweetie**

W0w, This Poem Is So Emotional. Great Work..... 5/5

x0x LoveLustTragedy x0x

I love the structure, the rhyming is great, the content is beautiful. it has so much emotion..

it's a really well written poem.

well doen :D

I loved this...I can relate...it almost made me cry.
I loved the imagery, flow and rhyme scheme.
The wording touched me deep.
Excellent.

I love this poem as - like so many people - I can relate. Love your work! xx Daniella