Wow...Beth... this one is great.. honestly... I like the emotion... the flow may need a little help! Good job

Kayla XOXO

I really like the way you wrote this poem, I can relate to it. 5/5! keep up the good work, read some of my poems xx

Great poem. seemed a little complex in parts, but thats good because makes sure the reader if paying full attention. i really liked the last few lines.

Wow that’s a truly incredible piece. It could do with a little more organization but i truly love your words, they speak by themselves. Its defiantly one of my favorite pieces i've read of late. Congratulations and good work, keep it up!

That was a very good poem.Yeah, it was kinda complicated in some spots but it was good...The flow of the poem gets messed in part of the poem but not too bad.well good job and keep up the good work

Oh, wow! that was truly an excellent poem! keep up the great work, hun. stay stong.
**lisa**

This was really good-it has a lot of emotion that is conveyed well in it. I love your choice of words.

This is so different from most the poems ive read
its truely amazing
keep up the good work

Wow this is really good!! It's so descriptive & emotional. I really liked it. Just the emotions it had behind it made it such a great poem. Really good job! 5/5*

I really liked this poem. You have a different style of writting that really pulls your poems above most other poems I read. The imagery you use always seems to captivate me.

Very unique and different but your style is still amazing. It had a complicated structure, but it was a pleasure to read. Keep up your great work!

T.L. --
I think this was great. The flow, and the rhyming , was perfect. It was also really interesting ;; so it kept my attention the whole time through. Definitely a great poem. =D 5/5

Samantha Hollywood

Whoever didn't give you a five on this is insane. Your work is great! It is so sad though. Great job on describing feelings in this one. I love it.

>black&&blue

Amazing. I like how you changed the song into something so much more. Very emotionally felt poem. I really enjoyed reading it.