Nice rhyming...well...iI love reading it out loud...and there's certainly very few poems that can actually impress me...well...this is one of the poems...and I really like it...it's very deep...from ur heart...not ur mind...if it's from ur mind...than u r extremely good...either way...u r a talented poet...

Wow... You are such an amazing writer. I love your poems, so keep em coming!