Complex and inticing poem. Very interesting; a puzzle in words.
-Kate

A unique layout acompanies a unique poem. A different topic that has been well-written about.

Keep writing
Nici

I read this one a while ago but never commented on it. It reads like a christmas story to me. The kind that you always see litle kids listening to on Christmas Eve. The word choice was beautiful :) But I just can't the image of little kids listening to it out of my head now.