I really like your poem because it describes how i feel about someone...great poem..i loved ur first 2 lines

Hey, great job! I don't have much in the way of constructive criticism because there's not a thing I would change. But just so that this isn't just like any other post, I'll let you know my favourite part. I love your style and the way you expressed your feelings in the beginning...
"I look at you and I wish you would see
all the emotions burning inside of me.
But you don't see a woman with a beautiful heart.
You see a little girl, who isn't all that smart."
:)

Absolutely amazing 5/5 barbara i love the idea

This is sweet, for the most part everything flows along nicely. On the third line I'd recommend removing the 'but' at the beginning because the it doesn't entirely make sense with the first two lines. I liked how you've kinda used casual language in this one - like the line 'who isn't all that smart.' It makes the whole poem sound more down to earth and intimate.

I really enojoy reading this poem...it so reminds me and of me and someone! i can totally relate! great job!

I loved this one.
Your poetry makes it seem
like you and I have a lot in common.
Great job.
5/5