Gurl u show much love 4 him n i say he would really would want 2 stick 2 a gurl lyk u dat has a soul full of luv. I love this poem very much. Wish everytime i put pen with paper i would b able 2 write but cant anymore ive lost my touch but either ways gurl keep it up n dont lose ur touch iiight!
_HUGS N KISSES!

Awe this is a really sweet poem... you need to talk to this guy girl!!! haha wonderfully written... keep it up!

sammie

Great poem. I know how it feels to feel this way about someone. I only hope he returns your feelings.

Tiffany.xox.

Its very cute.... good work.

Mami this poem is real sweet and reminds me of my school days...guess what I am going back to school. Going to college, I honestly thought I wouldnt. I am proud of myself, and I know I can make it. Well back to you, I guess you really made up your mind about Miguel, but what about Marco? Let me tell you something, I thought that Michael, my ex, not Rolando a guy I went out with after Rolando, I thought I was in love with him. I was so happy thinking I can love this guy. But as soon as I saw Rolando again, I opened my eyes and saw that I never loved Michael, I just loved the IDEA of being in love with someone that nice....I am not saying this is whats happening to you. YOU know what is in your heart. I am just saying you need to see Marco, and KNow for sure if what you felt for him has really diminished and I dont say gone or lost because he was your first true love and you never forget that. But you feel what I am saying? But other than that I am very happy for you.....do you have msn IM or AIM? So we could chat, my screen name in AIM is tricksrwatugt. Maybe we could talk more freely there....Love you ma,

::MELI::

Very sweet and pure. I love how you can feel the honesty in this poem, it's not sugar coated at all it's just real. I can totally relate and it's the greatest feeling in the world, but to me it's still a little confusing. I'm not used to being with somebody that makes me feel like it's ok to feel this way and tell him about it and he's completely cool about it. AWWW...Love! Beautiful job!

So beautiful and so cute... Keep up the amazing work, hunni! I love your poems!!

Wow.
This is EXACTLY how i feel.
Most of my poems in here were written during school.
5/5

Girl u show much love 4 him n i say he would really would want 2 stick 2 a gurl lyk u dat has a soul full of luv. with this poem you show how much you care and shpow him before its too late, dont make the same mistake i made last month show u love him all the while. i made a mistake and it cost me a guy i think i could have loved soon and my friend stole him off me dont let anyone near that guy. guyds r like sheep well most of them r.

I can give you a pink vote+comment,
awaiting your remarks on my poems, ty
bbye

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats so darn cute! i love it...i know this feelign all to well gurl fab work xox rc

I l o v e it!

Ok this is ok, rhyma and flow is a little off in some places. Other then that capitalize all I's and the first word on every line.
~~Sweetie

I've already voted/commented on this poem.
But I really love it.
5/5
(again)

AWW SO CUTE & SWEET, Im so happy for you and miguel, aww gd luck in the future hun and keep on writing take care xxoo

Wow...that was sooo sweet! you really do love him..dont you see..it seems like you are only ever thinking about him...very cute..keep it up!
xxx :)

Its very good. and im sure it has a ton of sentimental value aswell.

Awww this poem really is very cute, lol i love it

lots of love
*~*becky*~*