by DeepSecret08 Dec 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Let me go. Let me fall. Darkness is covering me into it all. I've let go. I gave my all. It always seems like I seem to fall...I can't go on. Let my blood flow and turn away....let no one know. I failed. I tried. Why should I hang on when there is no one on the other side? Don't worry about me just let me die. I'll open my wound and fall deep inside. I'll fall fast so no one can see....what the darkness has done to me. She let me go. She turned away. She said to forget and walk away. To let go of her hand and watch the image just drift away. I don't know what to do. Just tell me so I can make it thru. And when you open the door and you see me lying on the floor....Just turn away and don't cry for me another day.....and when you see the blood drip through the walls...don't bother wiping it up...just turn and walk away and for get about this day. Forget about seeing me...forget that you ever met me...Forget you saw those tears I cried. I just don't wanna fail again and end with a sorry goodbye....I don't wanna go thru the pain..I don't wanna go thru another day....I just wanna fall into the darkness to have it consume my all.....I wanna give up so I don't have to give in....I don't wanna win this fight....I can't go thru this another night. So when I say to you to turn and walk away.....don't look back at me and say that I should stay.... |
by Mezmeryz
Hey this was really well ritten..i luv it..keep riting coz wen u rite u pour your feelings out and that way it easier to handle your feelings...great work hun. |
by Spink
It's really good and detailed I like the style of writing good job |
by Mezmeryz
This was a very touching deep and sad poem...its got so much emotion without words..you get me? its soo good and the whole story of what is going on is well said...keep up the great work!! |