This was a very touching deep and sad poem...its got so much emotion without words..you get me? its soo good and the whole story of what is going on is well said...keep up the great work!!
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It's really good and detailed I like the style of writing good job

Hey this was really well ritten..i luv it..keep riting coz wen u rite u pour your feelings out and that way it easier to handle your feelings...great work hun.
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