by Trish-Rish Dec 1, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Walking in the Rain is where I let it all go. I fear no pain, letting my thoughts and feelings twist and flow. In the Rain, I will slowly walk strong and tall. Some Thoughts sad, and others getting me mad. But I'm not going to let it trouble me, because I know I can cry and no one will know. As the rain falls it speaks to me, and helps me see, the harmful past is no longer living, but only tomorrow is coming up fast. So make due with every thought and move. Control how you feel, and tomorrow is an unforgotten steal. Walk Tall and lean, Tilt your head back, as water is seeping in letting the lord know, you finally see. What life and love is all about. Fighting for your pride, and crying for ruff times. The rain taught me, not to be afraid, tears will roll, and its OK to fear. The rain of the lord has taught me to fly and soar. |
by dora
0h l0t 0f em0ti0n in this piece. beautifully w0rded. a t0uching piece very well written thank u f0r the c0mments 0n my w0rk! meant al0t!! =) |
by Dumpstead
Great poem. |
by TinyDancer46
Amazing... I sincerely enjoyed reading this poem. It provides such great advice.... Fantastic job!! |
by Dana.
Oooh..I love this one.It's the best out of your work.Keep it going! |
by Carrie
I like this very much |