I like this very much

Oooh..I love this one.It's the best out of your work.Keep it going!

Amazing... I sincerely enjoyed reading this poem. It provides such great advice.... Fantastic job!!

Great poem.

This is just a suggestion. Couldn't have been the last line better phrase.

I think the last word is"Soar" and not "swore". Plzz do a spell check on your poems during submission by taking pity on dumb heads like me.

0h l0t 0f em0ti0n in this piece. beautifully w0rded. a t0uching piece very well written thank u f0r the c0mments 0n my w0rk! meant al0t!! =)

l0ve always d0ra
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