Puzzle

by Raychel   Dec 1, 2005


My heart is broken
Into a million pieces,
My world is shattered
Like a mirror,

I want to cry,
I want tears to come flowing from my eyes,
I want to sob and get the pain out,
But I cant.

No one seems to notice.
No one seems to care.
No one sees the pain.
I want it all to end.

I struggle to find the pieces to my heart,
To my world,
So that I can try to put them back together,
But in each puzzle of my life,
A tiny piece is missing.

The piece that I need to finish,
The piece that will keep me going,
The piece that is missing in my life,
Is you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Xcite

    The piece that I need to finish,
    The piece that will keep me going,
    The piece that is missing in my life,
    Is you.

    ^ I love that! This is a great poem. Very good job! I have been there before so I can relate, but for 5 months now...I've never been happier. Thanx for the comment. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    I like how you compare him to a puzzle piece, and how youre incomplete without him. a very strong message, and a 5/5 from me

  • 18 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Realistic and very touching. I liked it. Well done =)

    Much love and God bless,
    Fallen.

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    GReat poem.. I especially liked the 3rd stanza. It was good.

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is so powerful! You are a good writer, keep it up!

    Mallori

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