by Juls Dec 2, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Tell my teachers |
by AlexJ
Wow this was a diffrent poem! It was really very good! I like it! |
by Katlynn
Very very sad. I really think that everything attracks to a mind. Like horriable things because it's nasty and it's all you think about. I mean i'm not saying your a killer or anything i'm saying that a shotting from a school you here gets to you and all of a sudden you write about it. And how one thing can lead to another. Like when you said you believe in god and he'll help you get threw this and then the boy shot the gun. You did an amazing job. very scary thing. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |
This is good, i like it. good job! |
by Letty
EXCELLENT... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. |
by Maelle
Sorry for leaving so many comments... Wow, that was awesome... I love your poems... they're beautiful... |