Brilliently written. i loved it so much. the flow was superb and the wordind was creative and intelligent. i think the opening line was my favorite

Brad

P.S. thanks for commenting on mine

0hh hey darl!!! h0w u g0ing!!!? havent sp0ken in aagess. neway great piece darl. very t0uching great use 0f w0rds. i miss reading ur stuff t0o =( g0od j0b 0n this! keep it up!!! =)

But i can and will wait that long,
because when it comes it will be so great.
I'll wait as long as needed,
for you cannot fight the hands of fate.

You've really got a talent for showing how you feel, and wow. a house?! Cool!

Lv A, x