Comments : The One Who Completes Me

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Nice...you post a poem up finally...and it's good...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I rlly enjoyed this poem. i kno someone that has the same problem w/ a friend of mine. i enjoyed it immensley. thx for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Woh! This poem is kinda off like the ones i've written but you did a much greter job at it! You werote it beatifully w/o a doubt I hope that girl realizes your love 4 her! Well you definitely got me 5/5 and in my favorites! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    This is EXCELLENT!!! i undersatnd how it feels in my own way, to love someone with evey fiber of ur being, but they dont feel the same, nor do they want to. i love the flow and with each rhyme, the feelings grow stronger and filled with more emotion. i love it!
    ~raychel

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Dude, that's so sweet. I guess we do think alike. And get rated the same. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job. I like this poem. I know how you feel. Telling someone you love them is scary but it's worth it if they love you too. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 17 years ago

    by Valentin

    I had an experience similar to what u wrote, which is y i loved ur poem, marverlous!

  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Wow this is a really good and well written poem.
    i say 'i love you' in my dreams too.
    i think lots of people can relate to this.
    thanks for the comment xx