Nice...you post a poem up finally...and it's good... |
I rlly enjoyed this poem. i kno someone that has the same problem w/ a friend of mine. i enjoyed it immensley. thx for the comment |
Woh! This poem is kinda off like the ones i've written but you did a much greter job at it! You werote it beatifully w/o a doubt I hope that girl realizes your love 4 her! Well you definitely got me 5/5 and in my favorites! ^_^ |
by Raychel
This is EXCELLENT!!! i undersatnd how it feels in my own way, to love someone with evey fiber of ur being, but they dont feel the same, nor do they want to. i love the flow and with each rhyme, the feelings grow stronger and filled with more emotion. i love it! |
by Ike Dizzle
Dude, that's so sweet. I guess we do think alike. And get rated the same. 5/5 |
by Ike Dizzle
Great job. I like this poem. I know how you feel. Telling someone you love them is scary but it's worth it if they love you too. 5/5 |
by Valentin
I had an experience similar to what u wrote, which is y i loved ur poem, marverlous! |
by lonelynow
Wow this is a really good and well written poem. |