Arrr sweety..
good way of writing one!
i know excatly how that feels as i have had it happen to me.. to see the new gf holding what was yours or what nearly was yours hurts dont it??

but just think even if you dont want to hear it yet.. that its best you havent got with him!......
but that kinda related to how i used to feel..
xx
o keep up the good wk!

I think that you a very talented writer, who know the right way to get the emotions to the reader and i think thats hard to find. Excellent job