Very good well done

Very, very, touching ...I can really relate to this . I have heard that saying a thousand times . ( He's gone to a better place, or she's gone to a better place ) I feel like you how do they know ? they don't . They just say anything to pacifie you . Keep writting . I love you're work ....luv Letty...xoxo

Very, very, touching ...I can really relate to this . I have heard that saying a thousand times . ( He's gone to a better place, or she's gone to a better place ) I feel like you how do they know ? they don't . They just say anything to pacifie you . Keep writting . I love you're work ....luv Letty...xoxo

I like this pooem it took me two reads to figure out where the rhthym was... may i suggest a little bit of a change?? ... changing it to six feet down below and her eyes no longer brown will glow.... it would sound so match more catchier but i t nice how it is... if this really happened then im sorry but im sort of over the whole reading peoples poems from the heart felt side because lots of people tlk shit now