Comments : One simple slice

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Wow. This is really good.
    Well written.
    I'm adding you to my favorites.

  • 18 years ago

    by jaeciee

    Your on my favorites now.
    excellent poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by f0rSaKeN AngeL

    Astounding! 5/5
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