But

by Martyna   Dec 2, 2005


Im weak,
but I can hurt you.
Im wrong,
but I can win you over.
Im selfish,
but I gave you my all.
Im careful,
but I managed to drop it-
your heart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    OMG!!! I love this poem so much. Nicely done.

  • 18 years ago

    by libby

    Short but quite pretty. I liked the ending most of all. Hah, thanks for trying out the punctuation... it does help, but I think you could use it more to your benefit in a longer piece where you don't follow a form so much. I also like the "list" type style that you used.

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