Loved this poem....great work |
by dora
0h hun 0nce again full 0f em0ti0n. l0t 0f t0uching lines there. sad n deep. very well written but!! |
Awesome...well...glad u don't feel so anymore...great work... |
"I'll become an empty corpse, |
O babe this poem is so sad. but beautifully written. ya sometimes just shutting it out will work. and for somethings it does. but i've heard that the only way to conquer our troubles is to face them. but i have no idea if thats true. but keep you chin up and you'll find the light! lyl~lex |
Aw right now i feel like this exactly, especially the first verse, i've kinda decided to shut my feelings out tooh aw, this is so sad, yet lovely great work hun |
by Razorblade
Oo. This was awesome, my favorite part was the final stanza. Terrfici job. |
by cindy
I really liked this poem. great job. |
I know exactly how u feel...its my new method to..emotionless.. |
by chris
Nice poem. |
by Lanie
I've felt like that b4 and i definitely know how you feel...this is a good one i loved it!! ( ^ - ^ ) |
Great poem =-) |
Hey, sorry about the scare yesterday, I was terrified myself, and let's just say it was one hell of a long night. The joys of withdrawl, or at least for me. You are a freakishly great person, thanks for being there that meant SOOO MUCH! And yeah, I did read this poem and I really like it, sounds nice and familar, lol. Keep writing! |
Oh my god,i totally love it and i can relate.hope you`re ok,i know what it feels like. |
Loved ur poem! 5/5. |
I am so sorry for what you are going through. I know sometimes it doesn't help when people tell you that they know what you are going through but I do. I was there. Doing anything to completely numb myself from my pain. i almost lost my life though and everything in. I don't know what you are going through but you have to deal with your pain. It will never go away until you confront it. I had so much bottled up inside me telling everyone I was fine until I completely lost it. there is this place that really helped me that you should look into. It is called mercy ministries. It was awesome and it is completely free! they love you no matter what and helped you sort everything out. go to mercyministries.com for more information. There is a lot more in this life than the pain you are trying to numb. I understand though. Let me know if you need anything. |
I thought that poem was very touching. Keep up the great work! I can tell you put alot of emotion into your poems and it made the writing very real. I enjoyed reading it. |
by stephyG
Omg..ur poem is soo good ur so talented..well done! Xoxo sTephy.. |
by Jaky
Only one word describes it and its :COOOOOOOOOllllllllllllllllll!!!!! |
by Kat
Wow that is really good, deep. |